This is my new story Fallen from Grace it?s been my project for ages and im glad to release it! This story contains violence and scenes some my find off putting, well sort of enjoy!
Pg13, 12A

Roxy walked into the garage of her boyfriend.
`You here? Come on!? Roxy said flirtatiously.
`I can?t have sex by myself you know.? She laughed

`Oh there you are, where?ve you been? Oh well at least you?re here.?
`Hun im starving can I get something to eat??
Her boyfriend nodded

`Honey you?ve run out of br..? a sudden sharp pain in Roxy?s back made her scream, her scream fell as did her body to the cold hard floor?.

The morning was bright, the sun shone through Angels window casting a golden haze around the room. Angel turned to see her alarm clock read 9:30.
`Oh crap? she thought `I?m gonna be late!?

Angel quickly jumped out of her bed and darted to her closet.
`What to wear, what to wear? were the words that ran through Angel and every other girls head in a morning

After about 7 minutes picking out an outfit Angel brushed her teeth and hair. She was all ready to go!

10 minutes later Angel set off to the tube station. Luckily for her it was only a couple of minutes away. But unfortunately Angel was one of those girls who needed a sausage roll in the morning which added an extra 7 minutes to the journey.
Angel arrived at Kings cross station at 10, luckily the train she needed had been delayed and so it was pretty much empty. As she sat down she worried about being fired for being late, but it was only her second day `they?ll let it pass? she told herself. She was a hairdresser at the Hair Lamour, a famous hair salon where many celebrities went to get there hair sorted in London.

Angel left the Piccadilly station at 10:10
Giving her 10 minutes to get to the Hair Lamour. She ran as fast as she could thru the hustle and bustle of Tuesday morning rush hour and arrived ate the salon with bang on 10:20.

No sooner had she sat down Zelsy appeared from the stairs.
`Come up! We?re all up here and I don?t want you looking like a loner.? Zelsy laughed.

Zelsy and Angel had been best friend ever since they met in year 7. They became great friends and both wanted to be professional hair dressers, so they followed their dreams and did it. Zelsy and Angel had nicknames for each other. Angel called Zelsy Zest or lemon and Zelsy would call Angel Angie or Halo.

They both went upstairs leading to the hairdressers lounge.
`Guys you remember Angel.? Zelsy said smiling
`Angie this is were we chill until we?re called.
`Called?? Angel said with a confused look on her face.

`When a customer calls they are asked who they would like to have and sometimes they will say that they will take `free? which means that a hair dresser who is `free? at that time will be called.? Said a fiery red head. `I?m Martica by the way?
`Nice to meet you? Angel said politely.

`Don?t worry I?ll make sure you get a cut today!? Zelsy whispered onto her best friends? ear.
`Thanks Zest you the best?
`Any time!? Zelsy laughed.

2 hours had past and hairdressers were called every 10 minutes. Zelsy had already cut and styled 8 customers. Then an elderly woman whose face would scare children walked into the salon examining it up and down and slyly ran her finger against the desk.

`Edna Reeves? she said to Martica, who was the receptionist for the hour.
`Okay? Martica said scanning through her book. `Ah here, erm did you say free??
`Yes I did, ahhh well then? Martica looked up the stairs.

Zelsy suddenly ran from her customer to Martica.
`Pick Angel!? Zelsy said enthusiastically.
`Erm I?m not so sure th?? Martica was cut off.
`Just call this Angel, im very busy today? Edna stated.
Martica looked up the stairs and called Angels name

Angel jumped out of her chair and ran down the stairs to the front desk and she looked at Zelsy and Zelsy just smiled and returned to her customer.

Angel took Edna to a free desk.
`What do you want?? Angel asked Edna kindly.
`You?re the hairdresser? Edna snapped `You tell me what I want.?
`Well okay then?
Angel thought hard of what to do to Edna?s hair she could just cut it or try something a little different or maybe she could shave the old cows? hair off?

20 minutes later Edna was looking at a new woman, she stood up, shook Angels hand and congratulated her.
`You?ve passed!? Edna exclaimed
`Passed what?? Angel asked confused
`That was a test! Every new girl gets it on her second day!? Edna chuckled

Angel looked at Zelsy.
`Did you know about this?? Angel asked looking at her best friend.
`Sorry but I did? she laughed `but I know that you?ve probably passed with flying colours!?
`And to celebrate we?ll open a bottle of bubbly once the salons closed? Martica said.
`We?ll have it here!? Angel said getting excited.
`But lets think about now? Martica said as a customer entered.

The boyfriend of the late Roxy was burying her body exactly at that moment.
`Goodbye my love, I?ll see you no more as you are in heaven and I shall go to hell.?

Suddenly police sirens rang getting louder and closer. Immediately he dropped the spade leaving the body visible and ran into the house routing thru various cabinets for his car keys.

A police car pulled up by his house, Officer Simons stepped out of the car leaving his colleague. He saw a pile of dirt in the garden and went to investigate. He looked over and saw the dead body lying there.
`Sick man? Simons said and ran into the back door of the house.

As he did, he heard an engine start and shouted to his colleague to chase the car that came out of the garage. Surely enough Simon?s colleague did as he was told and as soon as he saw the car exit the garage he hit the accelerator as hard as he could and the car chase was on!

It was 1:10 and the girls were starting to get hungry.
`Lunch? Martica called and all the girls went upstairs.
`Now as its Angel is new she is getting the lunch? Martica stated.
Angel just smiled `That?s okay with me?
`Brill, go to Subway they give us discounts and get me a subway club salad? Martica said.
`Get me a Ham Deli-Style Sandwich? Sammy said.
`I?ll have the cheese steak from the fresh value meal? Zelsy said
`Make that two? another hair dresser said
`I want a tuna Deli-Style Sandwich? said another.

Unfortunately the events that followed next had the most catastrophic results, maybe if the hair dressers just would have all asked for just a ham sandwich from the baker just down the street maybe the incident wouldn?t have happened?

Angel had all the order in her head as she walked down the stairs, followed closely behind was Zelsy.
`Hey I?ll help if you want? she suggested to her best friend.
`No it?s `k I can take care of it? she said and shone her beautiful smile.
`Well if you?re sure?
`I?m positive? Angel laughed as she walked out of the door.
`See you in a bit? Zelsy said as she walked back into the salon.

Zelsy then had a strange feeling that made her want to open the door and as she did she saw the worst sight you could as a best friend?.

Zelsy heard Angels scream suddenly die, she screamed and ran to her friend who was bleeding heavily.
`Angel? Zelsy screamed
`Zelsy?.Zest?..Lemon you have been the greatest?.best friend?I could have asked for?..and I thank you??? Angel then went blank.
`Angel?Angel?NO!?

They say when you die your whole life flashes before your eyes. This in Angel?s case is a true fact, she saw when she was a toddler cuddling her teddy, when she was a child being pushed on the swings, when she was a teenager having her first kiss. If only Angel?s life was longer she would have had more memories to see when she died.

`Where the hell am I?? Angel thought to herself
Angel looked around and realized she was floating in mid air which was pulling her towards a bright light.

She suddenly fell on her backside in front of a desk. She got up and looked around; she was in a tiny room with a big door. Suddenly she heard a voice.
`Not hell, heaven?
`What?? Angel said talking to thin air.

A man appeared behind the desk he was wearing a white suit and had very white hair.
`You said where the ?Hell? am I, well you actually in Heaven child.? The man said.
`Who are you? where am I? What happened??
`Angel, I am saint Peter, the gate keeper to heaven, you were in an unfortunate car accident.?

The memories raced thru Angels mind like the car did to her.
`So I?m?.dead?? Angel said sympathetically to herself.
`I?m afraid so? St Peter said `would you do me a favour and stand on the purple patch?
`Sure why??
`You?ll see?

St Peter picked up the phone that appeared on the desk, as soon as the receiver touched his ear Angel started to glow white.
`Why am I glowing?? Angel asked, she felt very relaxed.
`You are of pure spirit!? St Peter said with an amazed expression on his face.
`Meaning??
`You may pass through the gates and go into heaven?

The glowing then deceased, she walked to the giant door.
`Wait, you might want to see something before you leave, look out of that window? St Peter pointed at the window that ha just magically appeared.
Angel then went to the window. She saw a graveyard; she then saw her parents and Zelsy
`Is this my funeral?? Angel asked
`Yes I thought it may have been nice for you to see them before your depart?

Angel turned to him tears streaming down her cheeks. `Thank you?

Angel then walked over to the big door and looked at St Peter.
`Go, heaven is just through that door? He said with a smile.
Angel then walked into the door and a bright light blinded her.

`Welcome to heaven? a soothing voice said `sit?
Angel was in a completely white room there was a chair, Angel felt comfortable as she sat, sort of relaxed.

`Angel Williams, 20 years of age, mother and father, hairdresser? The voice said `your death was tragic but you are in a place of no killings or violence, no wars or unhappiness you un-life is now set into perfect mode, you are to meet at the Garden of Eden now.?
`But how?? Angel asked still feeling relaxed.

Suddenly, Angel was sat on a tree stump in a beautiful garden. She got up and was approached by an Angel
`Welcome to Eden! I am Glenda? she said, she had a goddess hairstyle and she wore a white dress. `This is where you shall now live!?
`In the garden of Eden? What, like there are houses?? Angel asked confused.
`Of course not in Eden you are free to roam but you must not??
`Eat an apple off that tree? Angel interrupted pointing at the tree.

`You obviously know what you?re doing, oh and one little gift? the angel pulled out a mirror and handed it to Angel. ` Its for you to see what is happening with your friends and family down on Earth, plus your clothes will need to change, go to Agatheya she will get you dressed!?
`Thanks? Angel said in a relaxed manor.

Angel walked over to Agatheya and got dressed; she let her hair down and just walked by the lake in the middle of the Garden. She pulled out the mirror and looked into it, she saw her parents, and her mum pushed her dad
`Why are they were fighting?? Angel said looking deeply into the mirror.

Back on Earth her parents were fighting.
`You were the one who wanted her to have a job!? her mum screamed at her dad.
`You?re blaming me for our daughters? death?? Justin gasped.
`Yes it?s your entire fault! It?s always your fault! We?re getting a divorce!? she screamed. She then ran to the bathroom and locked the door.
Angel couldn?t believe what she was seeing and hearing. `This is so unlike mum.? she thought to herself `why would she blame dad for my death??

Angel then got up and ran towards Agatheya.
`You have to help me!?
`Help you in what?? Agatheya asked in confusion.
`My parents are getting a divorce and it?s my entire fault!?
`And what do you want me to do about it??
`You?re an angel! Cant you like use you?re magic or something??
`Look honey, we can?t change what is happening down there; the only way you could help them is to apply for an Earth visit.?
`What? I could go back down to Earth?? Angel said excitedly.
`Don?t get your hopes up, there are only a couple of people lucky enough to go back down there, you?ll need a heaven of a reason for them to accept you proposal!? Agatheya explained.

`Well I?ll do it!? Angel proudly stated ?Where must I go to apply for an Earth Visit?
Agatheya sighed, `you must go to the forbidden tree and strike the snake with one of the branches from that tree, it?s very difficult but im sure with your enthusiasm that you?ll do it!?
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